The City Of Roar OCT - Round 2 Critiques

~The City Of Roar~

Round 2 Critiques


Another well done performance by Frey. The art was good, though more rough then last time, and even included color. Kudos! Color always attracts attention and shows that you are putting effort into it, but just make sure that it's neat and not sloppy. There was emotion and drama, a clear show of fear and tension in the Artist and OC. We suggest working on your posing on some movements, though most were fine. You’re angles are well and you’re back-story was good too. Creative, dramatic, and very interesting was the overall impression of your comic. Good job.


The art was cute in this comic, and it was long too, so we enjoyed reading this. We laughed at the crude humor, so bonus points there , humor and emotion is always important in comics. There was background in this, but not much, so we strongly suggest having more detail to the background as well as the characters. Also, even if the characters are cartoony, every kind of drawing deserves its own anatomy, so work on that as well. The plot was good and creative, and we certainly dig the relationship between the Artist and OC. Most people aren’t taking the alone time for emotional development, but you are, so bravo. Lastly, don't demend so heavily on dialogue. Include thoughts as well as action. You don't always need speech to describe a situation.


As before, the humor here was excellet! The drama to the plot was good, facing an army of Devourers (I hate spiders too) then missing your OC. That was well done! However, we were disappointed that we were left hanging. There wasnt much of a conclusion, to be honest. The art also could use better anatomy and posing, though it sure did hold our interest. Make sure all the writing is readable to, try not to use lighter colors or we won't be able to read it.


As before, we loved the drawing style, very cute . The quality of the art work was good once again, but we could tell that the quality dropped over time as the comic progressed. Make sure to always give it your best; edit and add detail, maybe even color. The plot was good and the relationship between the Artist and OC was great, but the comic cut off rather quickly and had no sense of conclusion. Avoid that, because it takes away from the overall performance. The anatomy was good, as was the posing, but it never hurts to practice more on them.

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I adored this comic! It was by far one of the super cleanest and easy to understand, but it was also heartfelt yet humorous. There is a bond between the OC and Artist, and it's good that you took advantage of doing that since you have plenty of one-on-one time with them. The requirements were filled with the physical fear and chains. Also, the characters are very 3D, having plenty of personlity. However, I'd advise working on adding more detail, maybe wrinkles in the clothing, backgrounds, and anatomy. Other then that it was wonderful!